Score: 9

"I like your style"

submission: Coleoptera Bibliophile

date: August 22, 2005

I like your representation. The fact that you brought in Kafka references I find pretty cool. The original bug was something like Samsa in that he was a bug, and he produced something bad with the exact opposite intentions. Glarg was also like Samsa for mostly the same reasons. Nice work :)

Score: 10

"Tight flow once again"

submission: Best McRapper

date: December 27, 2009

You've got good flow, rythm, delivery, and a lot of snappy lines in this one. I feel like you've found a good sound and are putting thought into what you write, which is wicked. So, good job on another track!

Now some critical thoughts. The lines stand alone very well, but I couldn't tie it all together and get what you're trying to say overall. I think the song would stand stronger if you gave it some structure. That doesn't mean add a chorus or anything else specific, just be aware of where it starts, where it ends, and how it gets there. As well, some distinct dynamics would be nice: highs and lows in energy, changes in the pace of the flow, etc.

Yup. As always with my criticism, take it and use it or call me a fool, either is cool with me, haha. Keep dropping these, it's always a pleasure to listen.

Score: 10

"Werd"

submission: HW - Haywyre 200

date: December 24, 2009

Good shit man, here's to another 200!

Score: 10

"Yay"

submission: FF | Laura

date: December 23, 2009

It sounds good at 0:40 when the sample goes into the underwater feel. I feel like some sporadic solo brass samples would sound good with this beat.